orgasms

by Crowbar

Posted to Stories on 2002-11-25 16:35:00

Parent message is 327871
I like anything that starts off with an orgasm, in any of its forms ;). And I rather enjoy the way your mind works. I’m bopping right along there with you. I’ve even worked up a thirst, I’m ready for a beer and some camaraderie.

Your previous piece, Life on a Scraped Mirror, was a sort of meditation on the passing of life. I found the contrast between that piece and this one interesting, Mirror with its somber introspection, Bash with its brash enthusiasm. Your writing style even reflects the contrast, almost like poetry within prose.

As always, since Bash is in progress I’d be interested in knowing where you’re headed with it.

Nice going.

Crowbar

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