Oh, that was goood, J.
by Billectric
Posted to Stories on 2002-12-02 13:25:00
Parent message is 331869
You have the knack, girl, I must say.
That passage about the jingling “metallic” leaves was so true to life, like when your senses are sharp yet tender & sharp and the ol’ crinkle in the cold – that whole paragraph, God, what a paragraph.
And the rest of it keeps sailing. The shirt with just the fingers sticking out – so true to life…
Ok, tell us the truth about something…does your family tree include a Hemingway somewhere ?