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by PhilipHarris

Posted to Stories on 2003-01-05 18:23:00

Parent message is 351763
don’t know what to say??

The whole story ‘flowed’ together real well…

Damn, I’m still flustered…it was a good story. I’m not a fan of erotic stories, I feel their too monotonous…but yours was well written. And that blurb of humor at the end, concluded the story well.

Not much else to say. You described sex pretty well, thankfully omitting all the ‘thrustings and jammings’ that other writers usually turn to.

Blahh…I’m done.

Good story, SMG.

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