Oh, man…

by Billectric

Posted to Stories on 2003-05-12 16:09:00

Parent message is 448168
I had a feeling there would be some twist at the end but I wasn’t expecting that.
This is well-written in the sense that it kept my interest. The scenes seemed real. I was interested in the people.
Maybe a couple of small grammatical errors but that’s ok.

Good Job.