Fine writing, I must say.
by Billectric
Posted to Stories on 2003-11-12 08:27:00
Parent message is 541310
I don’t even know where to begin; I like the rhythm, the subject, the phrases, the imagery, the references to things in the back of my mind, and the occasional rhyme. It’s like fireworks that hover instead of fall to earth, then take off again for another trajectory and burst color.