Who ´s crazy?
by Profeten
Posted to Stories on 2004-02-05 05:55:00
Parent message is 594162
Hi there. How nice of you to say a few words about about my story, although I didn’t really understand what exactly you meant…
There is a nice flow to this paranoia-story, but the sane man went insane a bit too suddenly. Maybe you could flesh it out a bit, and put in some subtle hints along the way. If you manage to make the reader aware of these hints in retrospect, this story would become truly good.