one thing puzzled me
by Hand
Posted to Stories on 2004-02-15 20:15:00
Parent message is 598690
good story.
But – Loon was clearly a loon, yet Alcoholic didn’t do any drinking, even when under extreme emotional stress. Does that mean she’s no longer an alcoholic? Maybe you should give her a new name. either that or have her drowning her sorrows every time Loon is a loon.
That’s not a criticsm, I was puzzled, but I guess that’s a good thing.
Carry on.