just one thing, and then we can move on

by in_extremis

Posted to Stories on 2004-06-24 15:54:00

Parent message is 666376
“It was the first day of music school and we all arrived with our instrument cases in our hands as our teacher addressed us:”

did you arrive as your teacher was beginning the address? had the teacher been addressing other students as you, yourslef, arrived? were you in a constant state of arrival throughout the teacher’s address?

when your opening line is that sloppy, i am hardly encouraged to read on.