finally
by judih.
Posted to Stories on 2004-07-09 21:10:00
Parent message is 675836
This is some good groundwork
what was the flaw in her eye?
take it on.
give me a reason to wonder.
Make this experience unique and either the start of a Childs re-birth or an ending that rocks your old way of living.
the mention of ‘flaw’ begs continuation
judih