the whole scene rang true

by Billectric

Posted to Stories on 2002-01-08 15:30:00

Parent message is 91499
i almost felt like Roger myself. Whether or not to continue it is up to what you think is left to say. Two tips, if I may – sometimes you think something is finished but a few days later you realize it’s not. Also, you might try making each “chapter” almost like a story in itself. This first one certainly qualifies for that. The last sentence could be the end AND the theme itself, and it can also signal the beginning of the next.

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