i’m with you all the way……(edited)

by Yabyum

Posted to Utterances on 2003-09-21 21:07:00

Parent message is 516605
thanks for reading it.
i was wondering if you could tell me how you read it?
ya see, it wasnt really supposed to have a point, i’m trying to work with my breathing. the whole thing is 8 breaths. did you read it fast? or did you take your time? i’m interested in how other people are reading this style.


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