hi kd….as you have read..

by doreen peri

Posted to Utterances on 2003-10-15 17:47:00

Parent message is 528964
… i disagree with most all of what Lrod posted to this thread

and i spoke out about it, of course

but when he got to pointing out that the piece could be stronger if i made the woman stronger, i had to agree, so i asked HOW to make her stronger and he didn’t provide me with any ideas on that except to have her bite the husband’s dick

that, being a dangerous proposition since she could have been murdered that way

so, that got me thinking…. murder… YES!!!! to make the character in my mini-play stronger, she should murder the perpetrator of abuse!

then, i could take it to an even deeper level of the courts not believing she was defending herself and locking her up in prison for murder

i think this piece will end up being a much better piece if i do this with it because the absurdities and ridiculous accusations to a woman as if she asked for it can be even more exposed

he’s a good writer and i appreciate his input to me as a writer

i’m a strong person with convictions and will not let anybody, including him, sway me from my convictions, expecially when we are talking about views which are judgemental and without the backing of fact

but i always want to improve my work, so i took seriously the comments about making her an even stronger woman than i portrayed her in this first draft

hope that helps you to nail me better 😉