i think that

by kerouac&dylan

Posted to Utterances on 2003-10-15 18:22:00

Parent message is 528981
you don’t have to make her a violent character to be a strong character, i think she just needs to fight and be active instead of as l-rod said have her complain, i think you can do this by describing how she moves put her in an offensive posistion instead of a helpless defensive position, give her some attitude and authority….but killing hims o.k too, but i still wonder whats the point of the story, are you trying to make a statement, if so what is it? that might help you descide what she should do.

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