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The Haiku Board

Try out your original haikus here. If you would like to be critiqued, please say so (PC=please critique, or NC=no critique).

kkizer offers some useful background information on haiku :

The classic form of haiku generally involves the seasons or some simple, unadulterated (not overly verbose) description of life or an instant image before the poet. The three poets generally considered to be masters of the haiku tradition are Basho (1644-94), Buson (1716-83) and Issa (1763-1827). They differed greatly: Basho was spiritual and poignant, Buson was more artistic and Issa was more emotional and humane.

What's interesing to note is that the commonly accepted 5-7-5 syllable style was never used by any of them. In fact, according to my research, the only 5-7-5 syllable style I could discover was as part of a larger poem called a RENGA, which was a collaborative poem. The first poet wrote the first verse in the 5-7-5 form, and each following poet had a different structure to follow.

For more on the history of haiku, please read this page.


beat by gonzobeat Apr 30, 2001 8:13 AM
I'm leaving by gonzobeat Apr 30, 2001 7:55 AM
mobius monday by mtmynd Apr 30, 2001 7:50 AM
terminal tuesday by judih May 1, 2001 6:09 AM
there by tennind May 1, 2001 5:27 PM
heinrich's manuever by mtmynd Apr 29, 2001 11:55 AM
shhh.. by mtmynd Apr 29, 2001 8:54 AM
gone by dead dog's eye Apr 29, 2001 6:18 AM
waytogo by god Apr 29, 2001 7:50 PM
thank you by dead dog's eye May 3, 2001 8:21 PM
please read by god Apr 28, 2001 11:30 PM
wait, i've got some more by god Apr 28, 2001 11:33 PM
End of April Haikus by kkizer Apr 28, 2001 1:35 PM
i invited rimbaud to dinner, but rambo showed up. by mtmynd Apr 27, 2001 9:39 PM
klick, the mouse by mtmynd Apr 27, 2001 7:13 AM
alien by Doctor Proteus Apr 27, 2001 7:03 AM
Now 2 by Old Bull Lee Apr 26, 2001 11:38 AM
Now by Old Bull Lee Apr 26, 2001 11:00 AM
playing with puerto rico is not haiku by judih Apr 26, 2001 7:38 AM
playing with puerto rico by judih Apr 26, 2001 7:13 AM
bastante! by mtmynd Apr 25, 2001 6:27 AM
Untitled (PC) by LeahW. Apr 24, 2001 9:08 PM
tell tale signs by mtmynd Apr 24, 2001 8:11 PM
a rival by mtmynd Apr 24, 2001 5:53 PM
pc! if you please... by guatama Apr 24, 2001 7:59 AM
crisp tears can handle anything by judih Apr 24, 2001 11:05 AM
thunderbolt by jojojeronomo Apr 24, 2001 12:51 PM
fish-net stockings by jojojeronomo Apr 23, 2001 7:08 PM
u talkin 2 u by judih Apr 24, 2001 10:56 AM
monkey at play by jojojeronomo Apr 24, 2001 12:12 PM
Meditation by AngelHeadedHipster Apr 23, 2001 6:33 AM
first time beginners mind by judih Apr 23, 2001 6:40 AM
Country rode by Mr. Do Apr 23, 2001 2:39 AM
mabou coal mines by dead dog's eye Apr 23, 2001 6:55 AM
hey by Jim Lee Apr 21, 2001 4:55 PM
nix by mtmynd Apr 19, 2001 8:42 PM
ett i kett know knows by judih Apr 19, 2001 9:20 PM
you're in... just t'ink! by mtmynd Apr 22, 2001 10:39 AM
dinner over easy by judih Apr 19, 2001 7:21 PM
Downtown Trinidad by somedaydave Apr 19, 2001 6:46 PM
dropkick the penguin into the sinai by mtmynd Apr 19, 2001 8:26 AM
the southern ulysses by mindbum Apr 19, 2001 12:18 AM
anomie by dead dog's eye Apr 18, 2001 9:00 PM
at my window by dead dog's eye Apr 18, 2001 8:17 PM
burger stand by jojojeronomo Apr 18, 2001 10:58 AM
Random Spring Haikus by kkizer Apr 17, 2001 7:13 PM
Fight Night Haikus by kkizer Apr 17, 2001 7:11 PM
getting Dionysus to smile by Tabloid Footprints Apr 17, 2001 10:00 AM
aero (PC) by rumball107 Apr 16, 2001 9:10 PM
driving homeward by dead dog's eye Apr 16, 2001 8:35 PM
chase by rumball107 Apr 16, 2001 6:19 PM
rumball by Sangha_Girl Apr 16, 2001 8:44 PM
giddy by rumball107 Apr 16, 2001 9:09 PM
canvas by Sangha_Girl Apr 16, 2001 4:38 PM
yeah. by dead dog's eye Apr 16, 2001 8:47 PM
PC-No title as of yet but I live in Cincinnati if that helps make sense of this by Sangha_Girl Apr 16, 2001 4:34 PM
meditation by Sharik Apr 16, 2001 3:05 AM
cleverness leaves me weary by Sharik Apr 16, 2001 3:02 AM
cleverness by rae Apr 17, 2001 1:56 PM
Bonzo pees when he greets me by Sharik Apr 16, 2001 2:58 AM
immodestly fond of ravens by Sharik Apr 16, 2001 2:54 AM
Books by Sharik Apr 16, 2001 2:46 AM
northern coast by dead dog's eye Apr 15, 2001 7:21 PM
winter shivers by judih Apr 15, 2001 7:46 PM
it feels like years since it's been here by dead dog's eye Apr 15, 2001 8:12 PM
green by rumball107 Apr 17, 2001 9:17 AM
mice with bladder problem by jojojeronomo Apr 15, 2001 5:42 PM
pompous squirrel by jojojeronomo Apr 15, 2001 3:29 PM
so god dam picky by jojojeronomo Apr 15, 2001 3:19 PM
uh, jojojeronomo by judih Apr 15, 2001 7:20 PM
yo judth by jojojeronomo Apr 16, 2001 3:19 PM
yo judth by jojojeronomo Apr 16, 2001 3:21 PM
pick it up by judih Apr 16, 2001 7:07 PM
flying by jojojeronomo Apr 16, 2001 10:32 PM
fly jojo fly by judih Apr 17, 2001 5:00 AM
stumble jud by jojojeronomo Apr 17, 2001 6:01 PM
david copper fields the fire by judih Apr 18, 2001 5:35 AM
good by jojojeronomo Apr 18, 2001 10:35 AM
something familiar by judih Apr 22, 2001 3:47 AM
Skyscrapers Make Great Shadows by Sharik Apr 15, 2001 1:34 PM
easter in the wester by mtmynd Apr 15, 2001 8:25 AM
Nocturnal Rainbows by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:56 PM
taunt me by judih Apr 14, 2001 11:54 PM
Silly Raven by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:59 PM
curry will get you anywhere by judih Apr 15, 2001 12:06 AM
I Took the Wrong Rhombus by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:48 PM
The Norwegian Would by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:37 PM
I Had Become Growlly by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:33 PM
My Penis Screams by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:27 PM
give it a vacation by jojojeronomo Apr 15, 2001 6:05 PM
lauren by dead dog's eye Apr 14, 2001 8:50 PM
prometheus by mtmynd Apr 14, 2001 12:38 PM
the latino by bpoetd Apr 13, 2001 7:24 AM
after five bowls- cw by bpoetd Apr 13, 2001 7:22 AM
I'm glad -cw by bpoetd Apr 13, 2001 7:21 AM
outside -cw by bpoetd Apr 13, 2001 7:19 AM
is it me? cw by bpoetd Apr 13, 2001 7:18 AM
all the cars by bpoetd Apr 13, 2001 7:15 AM
red by zentrocity Apr 13, 2001 3:55 AM
cricket- pc by bpoetd Apr 12, 2001 1:58 PM
this is by cylance Apr 12, 2001 2:14 PM
pc this one by bpoetd Apr 12, 2001 1:57 PM
funny by cylance Apr 12, 2001 2:08 PM
silence #6 by cylance Apr 12, 2001 12:54 PM
whispers shake by judih Apr 12, 2001 9:16 PM
silence #5 by cylance Apr 12, 2001 12:50 PM
silence #4 by cylance Apr 12, 2001 12:48 PM
silence #3 by cylance Apr 11, 2001 3:57 PM
silence #2 by cylance Apr 11, 2001 3:49 PM
silence #1 by cylance Apr 11, 2001 3:29 PM
ugh by bpoetd Apr 20, 2001 4:40 AM
haiku2! (pc...) by guatama Apr 11, 2001 11:44 AM
haiku! ( :pc ) by guatama Apr 10, 2001 7:21 PM
A True Haiku by niblo Apr 10, 2001 9:02 PM
To Nitpick A Bit by kkizer Apr 10, 2001 10:00 PM
Hm, ok by niblo Apr 11, 2001 6:10 AM
Yeah, by kkizer Apr 11, 2001 6:24 AM
Ripple by PhishPhan Apr 10, 2001 6:10 PM
April Coffee Shop Haikus III by kkizer Apr 10, 2001 2:53 PM
April Coffee Shop Haikus II by kkizer Apr 10, 2001 2:51 PM
April Coffee Shop Haikus by kkizer Apr 10, 2001 2:50 PM
untitled by Old Bull Lee Apr 10, 2001 9:51 AM
gutter ,minds by amesco47 Apr 10, 2001 9:11 AM
On Stage by PhishPhan Apr 9, 2001 9:14 PM
phish haiku by brooklyn Apr 10, 2001 3:56 PM
by the way ... by brooklyn Apr 10, 2001 3:56 PM
Critique..:) by Sangha_Girl Apr 9, 2001 5:48 PM
i can feel it... by Radka Apr 9, 2001 6:19 PM
omission? by guatama Apr 10, 2001 7:29 PM
round by Radka Apr 9, 2001 4:13 PM
Summer Comfort by BernardMarx Apr 8, 2001 10:48 PM
reply by madradiant Apr 9, 2001 3:04 AM
agree with madi by judih Apr 9, 2001 3:17 AM
pre dawn birds by judih Apr 8, 2001 8:25 PM
judih by BernardMarx Apr 8, 2001 10:47 PM
hey BernardMarx by judih Apr 9, 2001 3:11 AM
Invaders by BernardMarx Apr 8, 2001 8:02 PM
sal's haiku by salparadise Apr 7, 2001 8:17 PM
hey sal... by bill_ablin Apr 7, 2001 10:31 PM
ha... by bill_ablin Apr 7, 2001 10:33 PM
hey sal... by madradiant Apr 8, 2001 10:58 AM
April Peoria Haikus II by kkizer Apr 7, 2001 7:22 PM
hi from madi by madradiant Apr 8, 2001 10:52 AM
Peoria by BernardMarx Apr 8, 2001 7:50 PM
April Peoria Haikus by kkizer Apr 7, 2001 3:52 PM
posted before encore.... by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:36 AM
oh yes by sparklejames Apr 7, 2001 1:37 PM
posted before, sorry but please critique by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:34 AM
lost (but sturdy) by sparklejames Apr 7, 2001 1:43 PM
burnout by violet9ish Apr 7, 2001 1:43 PM
You know by now..I hate title lines!! PC by Sangha_Girl Apr 6, 2001 10:46 PM
You know by now..I hate title lines!! by Sangha_Girl Apr 6, 2001 10:46 PM
2 x? by Sangha_Girl Apr 6, 2001 10:51 PM
tasting... by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:27 AM
haiku, please critque by madradiant Apr 6, 2001 2:44 PM
Madradiant by Sangha_Girl Apr 6, 2001 10:39 PM
Sangha_Girl by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:23 AM
seems to me by bpoetd Apr 12, 2001 7:42 PM
haiku...cw by sparklejames Apr 6, 2001 2:26 PM
OHHHHH by Sangha_Girl Apr 6, 2001 10:37 PM
yeah by bill_ablin Apr 6, 2001 10:56 PM
beautiful... by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:26 AM
haiku...cw by sparklejames Apr 6, 2001 2:25 PM
melts my heart.... by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:29 AM
haiku... comments welcome by sparklejames Apr 6, 2001 2:24 PM
not so much... by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:30 AM
i don't have a name...critique the fuck out of it by bill_ablin Apr 6, 2001 12:56 PM
oh yeh i like by sparklejames Apr 6, 2001 2:36 PM
outstanding! by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:20 PM
Right Light by Tabloid Footprints Apr 6, 2001 11:23 AM
Autumn by Sangha_Girl Apr 5, 2001 9:56 PM
Harbinger II (Critique? Sure! :) by Sangha_Girl Apr 5, 2001 9:50 PM
Harbinger by Sangha_Girl Apr 5, 2001 9:42 PM
heart blooming by sparklejames Apr 6, 2001 2:29 PM
First post? Come on guys! Indulge your Zen! by Sangha_Girl Apr 5, 2001 9:41 PM
well done for being first... by madradiant Apr 7, 2001 10:31 AM
Wordy words by Sharik Apr 14, 2001 11:24 PM
the disease is not language by tinker jack May 20, 2004 6:56 AM


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