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This board is where members can post their own poetry, or provide helpful critiques to other poets. Most poets who post here are looking for constructive feedback, so please don't hold back your responses.

This particular board is designed for poetry of a more "composed" nature, as opposed to the Action Poetry board, which is for more spontaneous or collaborative poetic interaction.


biological trilogy 3 "vehicles" by Silas May 31, 2004 12:32 AM
Count me in! by Sylph May 31, 2004 4:48 AM
cheers sylph by Silas May 31, 2004 2:53 PM
it would be, would it twot by dawgcherry May 31, 2004 9:43 AM
Well by Silas May 31, 2004 2:57 PM
cromulent observations.. by j_daniels May 31, 2004 2:59 PM
somnambulent cropservations by Silas Jun 1, 2004 9:29 PM
lol by Sylph Jun 2, 2004 6:03 PM
silas tags by Silas Jun 3, 2004 12:42 AM
biological trilogy 2 "expressions" by Silas May 31, 2004 12:21 AM
Let us try it by Jespah Jun 2, 2004 1:59 AM
"imagined" energy by Silas Jun 2, 2004 1:22 PM
biological trilogy 1 "events" by Silas May 30, 2004 11:27 PM
dream about sand by StrawberryFire May 30, 2004 11:15 PM
firstly by Silas May 31, 2004 4:04 AM
l'm by Sylph May 31, 2004 4:57 AM
thanks by StrawberryFire May 31, 2004 7:31 PM
Centered by glowstar1387 May 30, 2004 6:21 PM
You asked by Sin May 31, 2004 11:35 PM
Thanks by glowstar1387 Jun 1, 2004 3:25 PM
we held hands all night. by SLucia May 30, 2004 4:31 PM
that by darkblood Jun 1, 2004 10:39 AM
Death unseen by hauntedmist May 30, 2004 4:04 PM
woven forever by Sin May 31, 2004 11:55 PM
Love is the flower by coolazice May 30, 2004 7:24 AM
HAVE U EVER TRIED TO BURN AN ANGEL? by manyfaced May 30, 2004 3:25 AM
i love it! by doreen peri May 30, 2004 8:42 AM
wow by runshadow May 30, 2004 11:40 AM
this by SLucia May 30, 2004 4:10 PM
amazing by student so and so Jun 1, 2004 2:55 PM
Have a drink. by Nicholas S. May 29, 2004 5:16 PM
Crumbs in my cleavage by Sylph May 29, 2004 5:13 PM
crumbs by pharmy6 May 31, 2004 1:11 PM
I uh... by Sylph May 31, 2004 1:17 PM
wonderful by Netzari5730 Jun 2, 2004 10:26 AM
i spent the evening wondering by doreen peri May 29, 2004 1:10 PM
Your best is not good enough. by Ting a Ling May 28, 2004 10:26 PM
Observations of a Torah Reading by Netzari5730 May 28, 2004 5:18 PM
I love by Sylph May 29, 2004 12:16 PM
Critique this please by Nicholas S. May 28, 2004 1:28 PM
empty bed (PC) by Jukebox Graduate May 28, 2004 7:27 AM
.. by fabled construct May 29, 2004 8:34 AM
a Real poem by * May 28, 2004 4:09 AM
His Name Was PAVLOV (PC) by fabled construct May 27, 2004 11:12 AM
Hello by bias May 27, 2004 12:01 PM
Thanks. by fabled construct May 27, 2004 12:25 PM
Re: Pavlov by nightbird Jun 4, 2004 10:26 AM
not poetry? by fabled construct Jun 4, 2004 1:03 PM
But... by nightbird Jun 14, 2004 10:25 AM
ah by fabled construct Jun 14, 2004 12:38 PM
Be an Astute Witness to Another's Worth by universe=one-song May 27, 2004 5:08 AM
About Opinions by bias May 27, 2004 2:00 AM
The eyes that wander. by Jon Converse May 27, 2004 12:46 AM
These kinds of poems are difficult by bias May 27, 2004 1:56 AM
heaven for people of aproximately 3 fifths by Silas May 27, 2004 12:10 AM
Yes by Nicholas S. May 28, 2004 3:54 PM
I'm feeling the same way I think. by fabled construct May 29, 2004 8:20 AM
If You Take Away The Stars (pc) by roaringthunder May 26, 2004 10:36 PM
... by fabled construct May 29, 2004 8:29 AM
songs from the cage by ~K May 26, 2004 8:27 PM
Harvest Moon by soyblood May 26, 2004 7:24 PM
UndeR YouR StandinG by nexusloops May 26, 2004 4:26 PM
Parallell by yeshua777 May 26, 2004 2:51 PM
Born in the plains by yeshua777 May 26, 2004 3:08 PM
Reclamation by origin May 26, 2004 2:21 PM
Cold Werewolf by yeshua777 May 26, 2004 2:55 PM
Removed for revisions by origin May 26, 2004 2:08 PM
Like the Storm that Rages.. by Createyers May 26, 2004 11:55 AM
the calm before... by Jon Converse May 27, 2004 12:53 AM
If you choose by Createyers May 27, 2004 6:52 AM
P.S. by Createyers May 27, 2004 6:54 AM
Sailor-PC by Nicholas S. May 26, 2004 10:22 AM
your poems by Createyers May 26, 2004 2:28 PM
Agreed by yeshua777 May 26, 2004 2:53 PM
Thanks for the comments by Nicholas S. May 26, 2004 4:13 PM
that is a problem you will encounter by Createyers May 27, 2004 6:38 AM
untitled - PC by Mie May 26, 2004 9:33 AM
My Best Friend by Nicholas S. May 26, 2004 4:15 PM
that's by seajay1221 May 26, 2004 5:29 PM
repetition by Mie May 26, 2004 9:29 AM
Her own world by Mayo May 26, 2004 8:19 AM
First critique on this site by bias May 26, 2004 11:05 AM
Thank you by Mayo May 26, 2004 1:58 PM
Frankly by Createyers May 26, 2004 2:14 PM
I was under the impression... by bias May 26, 2004 10:07 PM
Sir by Createyers May 27, 2004 6:47 AM
Ma'am by bias May 27, 2004 9:52 AM
I'm a woman!! by Mayo May 27, 2004 10:24 AM
Regression - a fish and his life by seajay1221 May 25, 2004 11:42 PM
nice work by Mie May 26, 2004 9:13 AM
found by seajay1221 May 26, 2004 9:17 AM
i am at smcm by Mie May 26, 2004 9:22 AM
waltzing to tv jazz... by adia May 25, 2004 8:04 PM
American Poets ... picking up where i left off ... by DocStray May 25, 2004 7:40 PM
5.25 by andyw May 25, 2004 7:14 PM
ill-icit by 4 degrees May 25, 2004 5:57 PM
rhyme... by doreen peri May 25, 2004 8:20 PM
Mesmerized by Mayo May 25, 2004 11:11 AM
how lucky by anewday May 25, 2004 7:17 PM
Camouflage Carnivals by frontal-abstraction May 25, 2004 6:01 AM
... by frontal-abstraction May 25, 2004 2:37 PM
Call for Readers by LitKicks Staff May 25, 2004 5:42 AM
dog.. by doreen peri May 26, 2004 11:26 AM
Eyes Like Ocean by Kristopher May 25, 2004 12:38 AM
libretto for a short opera by Silas May 24, 2004 11:53 PM
let me be the first by ~K May 25, 2004 1:57 AM
you can definitely by Silas May 25, 2004 2:59 AM
These Are Some Of The Beautiful Things by soyblood May 24, 2004 8:24 PM
Star(III) (For BWC) by ghostwalker May 24, 2004 5:29 PM
little gods by ~K May 24, 2004 5:17 PM
minimalist by Silas May 24, 2004 11:30 PM
acres of atmosphere by ~K May 24, 2004 11:41 PM
Gift by mtmynd May 24, 2004 2:33 PM
qualifying the vast unknown by doreen peri May 24, 2004 12:31 PM
... by ~K May 24, 2004 11:29 PM
i stole by doreen peri May 26, 2004 11:30 AM
The Flesh of My Bones by Createyers May 24, 2004 11:14 AM
"beaming benign by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:47 AM
it could possibly be by Createyers May 25, 2004 8:48 AM
haha by Createyers May 25, 2004 8:49 AM
who will dig our graves? by Silas May 24, 2004 12:23 AM
Silas... by Sylph May 24, 2004 10:09 AM
ashes by Silas May 24, 2004 4:10 PM
sometimes the words by Sylph May 24, 2004 4:28 PM
Silas by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:39 AM
this one by Silas May 24, 2004 4:03 PM
alvin ailey had me by doreen peri May 23, 2004 10:08 PM
"I die with every breath by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:57 AM
and you... by doreen peri May 24, 2004 3:14 PM
Outside Fitzgerald's -- critiques/suggestions would be helpful by violet9ish May 23, 2004 9:11 PM
Beautiful by Dead burroughs May 23, 2004 11:25 PM
No kidding DB by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:40 AM
ver good by itanjo May 24, 2004 9:22 PM
the nutcracker by itanjo May 23, 2004 8:49 PM
Damn! by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:38 AM
yeah by ~K May 24, 2004 11:23 PM
the sugartree by rain70 May 23, 2004 1:38 PM
it was... by fingurz May 23, 2004 1:49 PM
"nails of paper"...... by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:42 AM
nice work by Sylph May 24, 2004 12:22 PM
hey rain by ~K May 24, 2004 11:35 PM
It's a little late, but if you guys see this by rain70 Jun 3, 2004 1:59 PM
Oceanside (California) by nightbird May 23, 2004 7:55 AM
A poem, by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:50 AM
The space between. by Jon Converse May 23, 2004 5:21 AM
gnarly by fingurz May 23, 2004 1:55 PM
I'm waitin by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 11:44 AM
When Friendship turns to Love and Love to Hate (parts 1,2) by Dead burroughs May 23, 2004 12:15 AM
When Friendship turns to Love and Love to Hate (part 3) by Dead burroughs May 23, 2004 12:36 AM
(part 4) by Dead burroughs May 23, 2004 1:16 PM
... by young one May 23, 2004 3:31 PM
(part 5) by Dead burroughs May 24, 2004 12:16 AM
Ode to words by Sylph May 22, 2004 7:17 PM
cool by Dead burroughs May 23, 2004 1:02 PM
yea, man by fingurz May 23, 2004 2:00 PM
Thank you, sylph by young one May 23, 2004 3:33 PM
breathtaking by Silas May 23, 2004 4:24 PM
thank you all by Sylph May 24, 2004 4:39 AM
Well hey! by Hester Prynne May 24, 2004 12:00 PM
well by Sylph May 24, 2004 12:23 PM
Reality of Dreams by Sylph May 22, 2004 5:03 PM
Oval Oral Auras by young one May 23, 2004 3:37 PM
Oval Oral Aura by young one May 23, 2004 3:38 PM
I was by Sylph May 24, 2004 4:45 AM
Just by ARAHH May 25, 2004 7:25 AM
Now is all we know by Hester Prynne May 22, 2004 12:50 PM
Part I by frontal-abstraction May 22, 2004 5:22 AM
the right time to say what ive gotta say by adia May 21, 2004 11:20 PM
wondering... by sharon eiser May 23, 2004 3:05 PM
removed - needs editing by doreen peri May 21, 2004 9:29 PM
Sympathy for the Oak by fingurz May 21, 2004 9:24 PM
Amateur Drawings by fingurz May 21, 2004 9:20 PM
nice by Dead burroughs May 23, 2004 12:19 AM
Untitled #92 by fingurz May 21, 2004 9:17 PM
mutant variations (a naive prayer) by Silas May 21, 2004 5:54 PM
Silas.... by Hester Prynne May 21, 2004 7:06 PM
i don't know by Silas May 21, 2004 9:29 PM
amen by origin May 21, 2004 8:36 PM
defiant revolt by Silas May 21, 2004 9:31 PM
Breathless by origin May 21, 2004 5:27 PM
Powerful by Hester Prynne May 21, 2004 7:08 PM
Merci Hester, merci! by origin May 21, 2004 8:41 PM
Dreams on the Horizon by young one May 21, 2004 3:51 PM
Young one by origin May 21, 2004 8:46 PM
Emotional Evolution by origin May 21, 2004 3:33 PM
On Her Bed by jim vinny May 21, 2004 2:11 PM
I can just by Hester Prynne May 21, 2004 7:05 PM
RoaDBlocK by nexusloops May 21, 2004 9:33 AM
... by young one May 21, 2004 3:39 PM
My Bedroom by runshadow May 21, 2004 3:42 AM
birthday poem by rain70 May 21, 2004 12:38 AM
hey by runshadow May 21, 2004 3:46 AM
right on, by 4 degrees May 21, 2004 4:31 AM
happy birthday by Mie May 21, 2004 7:28 AM
heya by Sylph May 21, 2004 7:53 AM
Happy Birthday Rain.... by Hester Prynne May 21, 2004 8:48 AM
feliz cumpleaños, rain! by Arcadia May 21, 2004 10:29 AM
happy three, four to you, rain by judih. May 21, 2004 9:37 PM
thanx y'all by rain70 May 22, 2004 11:51 PM
its funny by adia May 20, 2004 9:45 PM
From there to here. by Chipzee May 20, 2004 1:47 PM
potent by 4 degrees May 20, 2004 1:05 PM
potentious by zen_ May 20, 2004 6:29 PM
depth by 4 degrees May 21, 2004 6:30 AM
narrow by zen_ May 22, 2004 10:51 PM
mmm-mmm!!!! by rain70 May 21, 2004 12:39 AM
i too can feel by young one May 21, 2004 4:04 PM
Vert de Gris by origin May 20, 2004 12:46 PM
firestarter by cylance May 20, 2004 3:10 AM
flood by coolazice May 20, 2004 12:34 AM
new worship by rain70 May 19, 2004 10:41 PM
this is by Silas May 19, 2004 11:06 PM
Bravo Rain! by Hester Prynne May 20, 2004 11:45 AM
ah... by rain70 May 21, 2004 12:22 AM
this by runshadow May 21, 2004 4:00 AM
we understand the perfection of the butterfly by Silas May 19, 2004 10:03 PM
the wedding party (or: other things fly) by rain70 May 19, 2004 10:49 PM
an eloquent response by Silas May 19, 2004 10:58 PM
an improv by rain70 May 19, 2004 11:00 PM
that is by Silas May 19, 2004 11:09 PM
... by rain70 May 20, 2004 8:42 AM
Silas... by Hester Prynne May 20, 2004 11:49 AM
thanks by Silas May 20, 2004 4:53 PM
releasing by Sylph May 21, 2004 8:01 AM
thanks by Silas May 21, 2004 5:23 PM
Fungus on pieces in distress by beat_fan May 19, 2004 2:24 PM
You know, by Hester Prynne May 20, 2004 11:55 AM
Today.. by Createyers May 19, 2004 10:56 AM
I am feeling too much in tune with the things around me. by tinker jack May 19, 2004 11:32 AM
... by Createyers May 20, 2004 6:16 AM
Excellent..... by Hester Prynne May 20, 2004 11:59 AM
I couldn't imagine by Createyers May 20, 2004 2:16 PM
If Simply Left Alone by jim vinny May 19, 2004 9:32 AM
damian caloman by BukowskisLover May 19, 2004 9:35 AM
close by jim vinny May 19, 2004 9:39 AM
maybe my eyes are bad by BukowskisLover May 19, 2004 9:42 AM
not for long by jim vinny May 19, 2004 9:43 AM
yeah by BukowskisLover May 19, 2004 9:45 AM
Hey Vinny.... by Hester Prynne May 20, 2004 12:02 PM
... by runshadow May 21, 2004 3:52 AM
my first post on this board, ever. my song. by BukowskisLover May 19, 2004 9:21 AM
it's a song! yep! by doreen peri May 19, 2004 9:48 AM
actually... by BukowskisLover May 19, 2004 2:33 PM
i didn't mean by doreen peri May 19, 2004 3:40 PM
hm by BukowskisLover May 20, 2004 8:48 AM
the next litkicks gathering is by doreen peri May 20, 2004 10:13 AM
hmmmm by BukowskisLover May 20, 2004 1:17 PM
translovemit by Silas May 19, 2004 12:14 AM
nicely by ARAHH May 19, 2004 4:08 AM
Sunday Roast by fabled construct May 18, 2004 2:29 PM
A Simple Form w/Shaded Meaning(s).. by Deez May 18, 2004 12:01 PM
hmm by Mie May 21, 2004 7:30 AM
method by 4 degrees May 18, 2004 10:54 AM
Damn by rain70 May 18, 2004 11:09 PM
Recognition by ARAHH May 18, 2004 5:29 AM
beautiful! by Sylph May 19, 2004 4:36 AM
Surrender by coolazice May 18, 2004 1:51 AM
feels like time travelling weather by Silas May 17, 2004 11:32 PM
how to exercise the creative organ & 7 other songs about hands & time by doreen peri May 17, 2004 9:17 PM
verbiage by nightbird May 18, 2004 10:29 AM
hey doreen by BukowskisLover May 19, 2004 9:20 AM
Spontaneous Combustion by fabulous May 17, 2004 9:14 PM
Requiem by StopMakingSense May 17, 2004 8:27 PM
shearing oneself by Silas May 17, 2004 11:39 PM
How can one make a hair metaphor... by origin May 21, 2004 8:13 PM
Meat by son_of_sham May 17, 2004 5:18 PM
a poem for gregg by gnorwebthgimi May 17, 2004 4:21 PM
is by weezer May 18, 2004 10:02 PM
dolphin bones by Silas May 17, 2004 3:15 PM
Reposting - please comment by Mie May 17, 2004 1:28 PM
... by Mie May 17, 2004 1:29 PM
I think by ~K May 17, 2004 8:14 PM
The Alcoholic's Morning Thought by fabulous May 17, 2004 1:26 PM
incredibly accurate by seajay1221 May 17, 2004 3:19 PM
The Projectionist by betabandido May 17, 2004 8:05 AM
Questions and.... by weezer May 17, 2004 12:43 AM
RaZoR by origin May 16, 2004 9:33 PM
shadowlife by doreen peri May 16, 2004 10:08 PM
sense of humor by doreen peri May 16, 2004 9:25 PM
oy by Mie May 17, 2004 1:26 PM
untangle me! by doreen peri May 16, 2004 8:51 PM
These words... by origin May 16, 2004 10:06 PM
love your lines of reply! by doreen peri May 18, 2004 7:53 AM
doreen by ~K May 16, 2004 11:14 PM
hi `K! by doreen peri May 18, 2004 7:55 AM
damn... by Mie May 17, 2004 1:24 PM
where? by doreen peri May 18, 2004 7:56 AM
SMCM by Mie May 21, 2004 7:20 AM
Ahh, and a fresh feeling comes to me. by Chipzee May 18, 2004 3:43 PM
everything by doreen peri May 18, 2004 5:09 PM
Poems by itanjo May 16, 2004 5:29 PM
i thought.. by doreen peri May 16, 2004 9:52 PM
The City is Alive (pc) by Andeh May 16, 2004 12:53 PM
good for the city and the speakers! by chronicshankar May 16, 2004 1:39 PM
Satan's Muse by ~K May 16, 2004 12:45 PM
it's always.. by doreen peri May 16, 2004 9:55 PM
Epidemic Democracy by weezer May 16, 2004 12:07 PM
keep on keepin on weezzzz by doreen peri May 16, 2004 9:58 PM
I by weezer May 17, 2004 12:34 AM
Agony by coolazice May 16, 2004 2:06 AM
Noah-Cain by arielWN May 16, 2004 1:23 PM
Mirage by coolazice May 16, 2004 2:05 AM
oh yes by ~K May 16, 2004 12:55 PM
to love & all its weather by Silas May 15, 2004 11:58 PM
WOW! by purple shower May 16, 2004 1:35 AM
you know.... by Sylph May 16, 2004 11:16 AM
mortimer icabod marker by pharroh May 15, 2004 7:28 PM
ambulance by pharroh May 15, 2004 6:58 PM
outwitting department store detectives by pharroh May 15, 2004 4:49 PM
:D by Omichle May 15, 2004 6:06 PM
Ode to Friendship by Omichle May 15, 2004 3:49 PM
How dare you! by sebsays May 15, 2004 5:46 PM
....ok... by Omichle May 15, 2004 6:20 PM
nevermind... by sebsays May 15, 2004 6:29 PM
Beside Me by Omichle May 15, 2004 3:46 PM
How the stars shine for you.... by sebsays May 15, 2004 5:41 PM
Washing over my mind like a cool shower - for mie by seajay1221 May 15, 2004 2:38 PM
Wow.... by sebsays May 15, 2004 6:15 PM
... by Mie May 16, 2004 5:57 PM
Tell Me What to Carve [PC] by arielWN May 15, 2004 12:51 PM
i have an idea! by pharroh May 15, 2004 4:53 PM
how's about a.... by crazyspyder May 15, 2004 9:31 PM
bloody, distorted face by arielWN May 16, 2004 1:45 PM
Not a poem just a suggestion. by tinker jack May 16, 2004 3:22 PM
liposuction by arielWN May 16, 2004 3:33 PM
Images, (eidited five words deleted) by tinker jack May 16, 2004 5:56 PM
the cellular by pharroh May 15, 2004 11:57 AM
heehee by mise_en_place May 15, 2004 11:58 AM
My suicide note by arielWN May 15, 2004 6:03 AM
guns are messy by pharroh May 15, 2004 12:02 PM
better to burn out than fade away by arielWN May 15, 2004 12:28 PM
Yuck-Yuck! by arielWN May 15, 2004 6:00 AM
A Talk with Death [PC] by arielWN May 15, 2004 5:41 AM
Put on your shoes, sweet Love by crazyspyder May 15, 2004 9:41 PM
NICHE [PC] by nightbird May 14, 2004 8:32 PM
This Writing is More Than Sex by Kristopher May 14, 2004 4:54 PM
she would by jessa_lynne May 15, 2004 1:06 AM
well by Kristopher May 15, 2004 6:22 PM
She might by Feelinducky1 May 15, 2004 1:45 AM
hey by Kristopher May 15, 2004 6:23 PM
www.fairycongress.com by universe=one-song May 14, 2004 4:53 PM
Free thought by rainloverboy May 14, 2004 2:18 PM
maybe it is by universe=one-song May 14, 2004 4:43 PM
is it by rainloverboy May 31, 2004 1:20 PM
Slow Drag by rainloverboy May 14, 2004 2:15 PM
Realize by rainloverboy May 14, 2004 2:11 PM
try this!... by crazyspyder May 14, 2004 6:13 PM
no reason by rainloverboy Jun 1, 2004 6:26 AM
Makes me curious, he does by purple shower Jun 26, 2004 5:35 AM
Burn by rainloverboy May 14, 2004 2:08 PM
light my... by crazyspyder May 14, 2004 6:01 PM
enamored by 4 degrees May 14, 2004 12:48 PM
Dissident by luckystrikes May 14, 2004 11:18 AM
Confused Prophet by luckystrikes May 14, 2004 11:16 AM
amnesiac guru by seajay1221 May 21, 2004 5:04 PM
Free Tibet by luckystrikes May 14, 2004 11:13 AM
Difference of Opinion by luckystrikes May 14, 2004 11:08 AM
An Ode to a Girl That Could Never Love Me the Same by Elgi May 14, 2004 10:40 AM
Heaven in you pen by crazyspyder May 14, 2004 6:24 PM
Let go by Elgi May 14, 2004 10:34 AM
A storm in passing by Sylph May 14, 2004 6:52 AM
enraptured by crazyspyder May 14, 2004 6:27 PM
thank you by Sylph May 15, 2004 6:04 AM
Warm & Fuzzy In E Major by nightbird May 13, 2004 9:48 PM
e major is a great idea by judih. May 13, 2004 10:36 PM
loved by Lightswitch May 14, 2004 1:58 PM
A shot of mastermind by goneastray May 13, 2004 9:23 PM
wha?? by goneastray May 13, 2004 8:56 PM
No innocence left in this machine by goneastray May 13, 2004 7:48 PM
Cartón para la vuelta de Mambrú (1941) by Arcadia May 13, 2004 8:15 PM
Endgame Days of Flesh and Soul by THE RENEGADE POET May 13, 2004 4:56 PM
wow by Arcadia May 13, 2004 7:40 PM
Riots Everyday by izeveryboyin May 13, 2004 1:03 PM
Follow us by Mie May 13, 2004 6:30 PM
Man, I had a phucking by izeveryboyin May 14, 2004 3:33 PM
I wanna riot by goneastray May 13, 2004 9:26 PM
Well come on and by izeveryboyin May 14, 2004 3:34 PM
matter of fact by luke t/drifter May 14, 2004 4:25 AM
We should definetly consider by izeveryboyin May 14, 2004 3:36 PM
...but seriously, by luke t/drifter May 14, 2004 4:40 AM
Trust in whatever... by izeveryboyin May 14, 2004 3:37 PM
Very very ... by junior fits May 14, 2004 8:40 AM
Thnak you for the by izeveryboyin May 14, 2004 3:40 PM
My first poem (sorta), be gentle-PC by Feelinducky1 May 13, 2004 5:35 AM
You suck!! by Feelinducky1 May 13, 2004 10:49 AM
hope it's not by universe=one-song May 14, 2004 4:45 PM
I always worry by Feelinducky1 May 15, 2004 4:17 AM
well by ~K May 16, 2004 12:52 PM
i by ModernAncient May 12, 2004 11:36 PM
? by ModernAncient May 12, 2004 11:35 PM
there is by ModernAncient May 12, 2004 11:26 PM
The End. (pc) by ModernAncient May 12, 2004 11:20 PM
I by Sean McGahey May 13, 2004 12:25 AM
Everything we do by junior fits May 13, 2004 10:02 AM
good by seajay1221 May 13, 2004 2:37 PM
moving at the speed of life - PC by Mie May 12, 2004 10:48 PM
fuck that by seajay1221 May 12, 2004 11:56 PM
until by ModernAncient May 12, 2004 8:03 PM
not sure where to file this... by 4 degrees May 12, 2004 7:31 PM
17 by Kristopher May 12, 2004 5:32 PM
This is so sad! by mise_en_place May 12, 2004 6:08 PM
we are all made of stars. by josh tonkin May 12, 2004 5:12 PM
"todas las hojas son del viento... by Arcadia May 12, 2004 5:19 PM
Beam in the bubble helmet by mise_en_place May 12, 2004 5:48 PM
As of Yet by sensibledelusion May 12, 2004 4:56 PM
! by ~K May 12, 2004 9:03 PM
Pictures of Dress Up by sensibledelusion May 12, 2004 4:54 PM
Sunday Monster PC by TVstoleMYsoul May 12, 2004 4:24 PM
silly games PC by TVstoleMYsoul May 12, 2004 4:24 PM
The Old Man PC by TVstoleMYsoul May 12, 2004 4:23 PM
Reminded me of one... by junior fits May 14, 2004 8:19 AM
Plot lines in D Flat by sensibledelusion May 12, 2004 4:04 PM
[NO REVOLUTION] PC by nightbird May 12, 2004 1:11 PM
Nothings Changed by luckystrikes May 12, 2004 3:08 PM
Penumbra by ~K May 12, 2004 1:07 PM
sunburnmoonshine by Siege May 12, 2004 6:15 AM
Bomb Factory by Siege May 12, 2004 5:52 AM
a suitable illusion by Silas May 12, 2004 4:01 AM
very nice by ~K May 12, 2004 9:15 PM
thanks k. by Silas May 12, 2004 9:35 PM
Monster making by ~K May 16, 2004 12:34 PM
velvet by Silas May 12, 2004 1:46 AM
OMG!!! by purple shower May 12, 2004 5:04 AM
you know by Silas May 12, 2004 2:22 PM
untitled by Sean McGahey May 12, 2004 12:22 AM
Morality In A War Zone by champagne1982 May 11, 2004 8:59 PM
Naked Sky by LadyLazurus3 May 11, 2004 8:46 PM
Shining Eyes by LadyLazurus3 May 11, 2004 8:42 PM
i am so happy. by Glorious Amok May 11, 2004 2:15 PM
mmmm by Glorious Amok May 11, 2004 2:19 PM
finally blossoming by universe=one-song May 11, 2004 3:25 PM
number six by Lightswitch May 11, 2004 12:52 PM
Passion That Could Not Be Found by Ron Moulden May 11, 2004 10:56 AM
mistetoe pc by slog May 11, 2004 10:47 AM
This is highly inappropriate.... by McGog May 11, 2004 8:59 AM
a great ambition by doreen peri May 11, 2004 7:55 AM
Allen Ginsberg Said It Best!!!! by Dave The Dov May 11, 2004 10:35 AM
and ginsberg won't rise again by doreen peri May 11, 2004 11:24 AM
To step by nexusloops May 11, 2004 1:34 AM
Smallnesses, gigantic by Hester Prynne May 11, 2004 12:52 AM
gigglin' by welded sprocket May 11, 2004 1:17 AM
Father's Approval - this is my first post & the poem that I was born to write-PC by moonlight_boy May 10, 2004 7:36 PM
relating by cylance May 11, 2004 1:55 AM
Not in his eyes by universe=one-song May 11, 2004 3:32 PM
M.S. by tonightwedrink May 10, 2004 6:59 PM
to the hated lover, or "the secret charms of the velvet robe" by MokoYromem May 10, 2004 7:13 PM
night class distraction by Lightswitch May 10, 2004 4:10 PM
To Kiss by nexusloops May 10, 2004 3:29 PM
flashbacks by Lightswitch May 10, 2004 4:19 PM
Think... by MARKY P May 10, 2004 5:04 PM
Think... by MARKY P May 10, 2004 5:07 PM
bareback on the lincoln by 4 degrees May 10, 2004 12:35 PM
reply by tonightwedrink May 10, 2004 6:48 PM
dressed for poetry by champagne1982 May 10, 2004 9:27 AM
a shining pale by tonightwedrink May 10, 2004 6:39 PM
Political Exile by Ron Moulden May 10, 2004 8:47 AM
I ... by phunky_womyn May 10, 2004 10:13 AM
You've captured it well. by Ron Moulden May 11, 2004 10:42 AM
essence by mtmynd May 9, 2004 9:25 PM
the thing by Silas May 9, 2004 11:53 PM
we can only be that which we are by universe=one-song May 10, 2004 8:48 AM
thx, silas by mtmynd May 10, 2004 12:45 PM
liquid lizard by Lightswitch May 9, 2004 9:20 PM
texturally by Silas May 10, 2004 12:00 AM
thanks by Lightswitch May 10, 2004 3:58 PM
swan lake variations by Silas May 9, 2004 7:56 PM
ah Silas.... by Hester Prynne May 10, 2004 10:40 AM
you're back by SLucia May 9, 2004 3:17 PM
I can really by Silas May 9, 2004 11:49 PM
'no swimming' by universe=one-song May 9, 2004 12:38 PM
Interesting by jojojo000 May 9, 2004 5:06 PM
nice insight by Silas May 10, 2004 12:03 AM
Everywhere I have stepped by universe=one-song May 11, 2004 3:34 PM
thanks fer the feedback by universe=one-song May 10, 2004 8:44 AM
Lose the fat by Hester Prynne May 9, 2004 11:01 AM
hahaha (bravo) by phunky_womyn May 9, 2004 8:29 PM
Dear Dr Hester by Silas May 10, 2004 12:06 AM
Heh by Hester Prynne May 10, 2004 11:17 AM
I love this... by Feelinducky1 May 13, 2004 5:23 AM
bunny is gun by rain70 May 8, 2004 10:43 PM
hey stranger by Sylph May 9, 2004 5:29 AM
same by rain70 May 9, 2004 9:59 PM
. by doreen peri May 8, 2004 9:02 PM
. by doreen peri May 8, 2004 9:20 PM
minimalism by doreen peri May 8, 2004 10:04 PM
sisters of the moon by sapphic-sistah May 8, 2004 5:38 PM
little prose for ya by Jon Converse May 8, 2004 5:17 PM
looks and reads like.. by doreen peri May 8, 2004 5:34 PM
I think it was by izeveryboyin May 8, 2004 7:07 PM
Summer Day by Ron Moulden May 8, 2004 4:52 PM
The City is Dead (share, or critique?) by Andeh May 8, 2004 2:40 PM
Mother, My by phunky_womyn May 8, 2004 2:27 PM
I absolutely by Hester Prynne May 9, 2004 5:00 PM
Thank you :) by phunky_womyn May 9, 2004 8:12 PM
you are gooood by sapphic-sistah May 9, 2004 11:28 PM
time is harder to ride than the wind by doreen peri May 8, 2004 8:36 AM
riding the wind like a bell by jota May 8, 2004 10:41 AM
it's about time by doreen peri May 9, 2004 9:36 AM
Doreen...this by djaiv May 8, 2004 1:49 PM
oh no!! think about this.. by doreen peri May 9, 2004 9:34 AM
I write poetry on the walls. by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 1:22 AM
safe with a pen by djaiv May 8, 2004 1:51 PM
might be by indian`double`pink May 8, 2004 2:14 PM
My gut says by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 6:25 PM
Hiya Hest by Sylph May 8, 2004 8:17 PM
nevermind by arielWN May 8, 2004 12:23 AM
my favorite customer.. by feloniousslunk May 7, 2004 11:52 PM
then by Arcadia May 8, 2004 7:05 AM
what they think of us now by jota May 7, 2004 8:17 PM
..... by 4 degrees May 7, 2004 8:40 PM
nah nah nah by jota May 7, 2004 8:52 PM
undertones by judih. May 7, 2004 9:19 PM
cunt department by jota May 7, 2004 9:11 PM
bitching lessons by judih. May 7, 2004 9:18 PM
adolescent by 4 degrees May 7, 2004 9:22 PM
Whoa ho ho ho ho! by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 2:02 AM
He said.... by sebsays May 9, 2004 3:46 PM
flow was flawed.. by feloniousslunk May 7, 2004 11:10 PM
sounds familiar by seajay1221 May 8, 2004 7:55 PM
Let's do the show in SF!!! by sebsays May 9, 2004 3:48 PM
Pacific Gargle by headburner May 7, 2004 7:15 PM
I like by pariahX May 7, 2004 7:31 PM
see by Sylph May 8, 2004 6:03 AM
The Perversion of Always by ~K May 7, 2004 4:15 PM
... by headburner May 7, 2004 7:24 PM
you hit the nail by ~K May 12, 2004 11:29 AM
..... by 4 degrees May 7, 2004 8:43 PM
..... by ~K May 12, 2004 11:30 AM
nice by Mie May 9, 2004 4:58 PM
why, by ~K May 12, 2004 11:30 AM
Some token concessions by AlexanderStrakhov May 7, 2004 3:22 PM
Some tokin sessions by seajay1221 May 8, 2004 7:58 PM
Interesting by phunky_womyn May 9, 2004 8:15 PM
the sunday by e_dog May 7, 2004 3:09 PM
inner light by universe=one-song May 7, 2004 11:27 AM
The bulb burned out by luckystrikes May 12, 2004 3:10 PM
Red Shift/Perspective by Deez May 7, 2004 11:05 AM
read perspective by 4 degrees May 7, 2004 11:10 AM
perfidious by 4 degrees May 7, 2004 11:05 AM
! by Deez May 7, 2004 11:28 AM
mmmm by ~K May 7, 2004 5:32 PM
Russell Street Divorce by Ron Moulden May 7, 2004 10:42 AM
Wow Ron by Sylph May 7, 2004 11:19 AM
embryo (slight revision) by Silas May 7, 2004 9:46 AM
yep by Sylph May 7, 2004 11:10 AM
Learning to be naked (for Silas) by Sylph May 7, 2004 7:31 AM
your season in eden by purple shower May 7, 2004 7:53 AM
sponteneity by Sylph May 7, 2004 8:01 AM
simply by Silas May 7, 2004 9:52 AM
ho by pariahX May 7, 2004 7:34 PM
hey by Sylph May 8, 2004 5:53 AM
thats by Silas May 8, 2004 7:08 AM
Dingleberry [NC] by arielWN May 7, 2004 5:28 AM
What a sh*tty poem! haha by arielWN May 7, 2004 5:31 AM
it's a stinker :) by Deez May 7, 2004 11:25 AM
when did he "pooh" me out? by arielWN May 7, 2004 11:23 PM
well you know by Deez May 10, 2004 9:41 AM
this might work by pariahX May 7, 2004 7:33 PM
embryo (for Sylph) by Silas May 7, 2004 2:29 AM
ah... by Sylph May 7, 2004 7:22 AM
PC - Innocence Misplaced by Soulful_Wanderer May 7, 2004 12:05 AM
feeling you by seajay1221 May 6, 2004 6:41 PM
At least... by luckystrikes May 12, 2004 2:59 PM
Spiral by Hidden Exit May 6, 2004 4:42 PM
A Nother Poem by Hidden Exit May 6, 2004 4:35 PM
Somewhat Experimental Poem by Hidden Exit May 6, 2004 4:26 PM
phorever by minfin May 6, 2004 6:49 AM
special effects by minfin May 6, 2004 6:52 AM
man by Deez May 6, 2004 1:45 PM
…what if? by Sean McGahey May 6, 2004 5:36 AM
I sniff faith, like it was cocaine. by Hester Prynne May 6, 2004 2:09 AM
whiskey,ennui and assorted distractions... by feloniousslunk May 6, 2004 12:33 AM
Some of the by Hester Prynne May 6, 2004 2:12 AM
Viva La Rivolution----updated version by soluspoeta May 5, 2004 9:20 PM
Absolutely fantastic by junior fits May 6, 2004 3:54 AM
crap by Kristopher May 5, 2004 5:50 PM
A poem about dreams by mattc May 5, 2004 2:19 PM
Some Lyrics by Nightwalk May 5, 2004 4:58 AM
Here's Mine!!!! by Dave The Dov May 5, 2004 11:46 AM
Thanks by Nightwalk May 11, 2004 5:10 AM
Yes It Is!!!! by Dave The Dov May 11, 2004 12:52 PM
so much more by Silas May 5, 2004 2:55 AM
there is by jessa_lynne May 5, 2004 10:36 AM
smiling by Silas May 5, 2004 1:11 PM
Once again Silas... by Hester Prynne May 6, 2004 2:15 AM
Cheers H by Silas May 6, 2004 3:59 AM
for Houston by violet9ish May 4, 2004 8:04 PM
I like the poem, but by emostat May 5, 2004 6:31 PM
austin by violet9ish May 5, 2004 11:35 PM
very nice by itanjo May 16, 2004 5:23 PM
need by shade May 4, 2004 6:39 PM
=) by purple shower May 5, 2004 3:56 PM
Selected Proverbs by itanjo May 4, 2004 2:49 PM
petals for petunia by mindbum May 4, 2004 1:36 PM
mirror to mirror by mindbum May 4, 2004 12:10 PM
The Truck Is Bigger Than All of Us by izeveryboyin May 4, 2004 9:34 AM
a wild ride! by Hester Prynne May 4, 2004 11:54 AM
You were in a band??? by izeveryboyin May 5, 2004 9:04 AM
Ha ha.... by Hester Prynne May 5, 2004 3:36 PM
well, only the ones u by izeveryboyin May 8, 2004 5:55 PM
No wonder by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 6:30 PM
I kinda annoy you.. lol by izeveryboyin May 8, 2004 7:04 PM
Well, by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 7:18 PM
.. by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 6:27 PM
heh by izeveryboyin May 8, 2004 7:05 PM
go ahead and laugh by Hester Prynne May 8, 2004 7:16 PM
Everyone annoys by izeveryboyin May 12, 2004 10:07 AM
impalpable by 4 degrees May 4, 2004 6:51 AM
last lines by Deez May 4, 2004 8:34 AM
Hey 4 by R D Eckart May 4, 2004 8:41 AM
poem on entering a garden after years in a desert by Silas May 4, 2004 3:05 AM
simply by Sylph May 4, 2004 4:10 AM
Slyph by Silas May 4, 2004 12:39 PM
Silas.... by Hester Prynne May 4, 2004 11:40 AM
well by Silas May 4, 2004 12:37 PM
Untitled - Please comment by Mie May 4, 2004 12:19 AM
untitled comment by Sylph May 4, 2004 4:04 AM
your welcome by Mie May 4, 2004 7:09 AM
distitled by seajay1221 May 4, 2004 8:10 PM
... by arielWN May 5, 2004 6:23 AM
The Cicadas by emostat May 3, 2004 7:28 PM
totally enjoyed this by Sylph May 4, 2004 4:18 AM
Thanks much by emostat May 4, 2004 6:52 PM
here too... by firecracker May 5, 2004 11:58 AM
Danke by emostat May 5, 2004 6:23 PM
Cicadas (new version) by emostat May 12, 2004 7:05 PM
got some on by michaelsferrell May 3, 2004 6:22 PM
Assembly line coffins. by R D Eckart May 3, 2004 5:30 PM
hey R.D. by Sylph May 4, 2004 4:12 AM
busy by R D Eckart May 4, 2004 8:37 AM
I hear ya by Sylph May 4, 2004 9:37 AM
Shhh by R D Eckart May 4, 2004 9:48 AM
Thoughts with Birds by Uncle B May 3, 2004 10:08 AM
bright lit rooms at early morning by jessa_lynne May 3, 2004 8:49 AM
... by Deez May 4, 2004 8:33 AM
thank you for the reply by jessa_lynne May 4, 2004 10:45 AM
Shadows In A Shattered Mirror by addonis May 3, 2004 5:39 AM
. by arielWN May 3, 2004 6:07 PM
Dialogue by mtmynd May 2, 2004 9:24 PM
. by arielWN May 3, 2004 6:13 PM
idle hands are the devil's playground by seajay1221 May 2, 2004 8:08 PM
The Pied Piper by itanjo May 2, 2004 8:06 PM
enchanting by arielWN May 10, 2004 1:23 AM
endless maze by Crackpot Jenkins May 2, 2004 3:24 PM
nice one by Mie May 4, 2004 12:20 AM
I'm looking for me by ghostwalker May 2, 2004 8:57 AM
Visibility is a Dome by HopelesslyHopeless May 1, 2004 7:25 PM
some light... by arielWN May 5, 2004 3:43 PM
New World Order by e_dog May 1, 2004 1:57 PM
kalifornia by slog May 1, 2004 4:08 PM


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