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This board is where LitKicks members can post stories of any kind. Fiction, satire, autobiography, meta-fiction and any other kind of prose is welcomed.

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Loving him, liking her by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Sep 29, 2003 9:54 PM
Uuuuughmmmmm. by Rickety Sep 29, 2003 12:37 PM
nicely by shyster Oct 21, 2003 4:04 AM
‘Just like Oxford and Cambridge’ by eumenades Sep 28, 2003 1:43 AM
comment by elvin Oct 12, 2003 10:16 PM
erotic and spiritual fiction by eumenades Oct 19, 2003 8:53 PM
stories by elvin Oct 22, 2003 5:28 PM
Whore for attention, or: me, in a way. (NC) by Rickety Sep 27, 2003 12:06 PM
The invisible by Tulate Sep 26, 2003 6:49 PM
Frankly my dear..... by Hester Prynne Sep 26, 2003 7:25 PM
thought you were by Tulate Sep 29, 2003 5:19 AM
The Typewriter. by somnambulist Sep 26, 2003 4:37 PM
BRAVA! by Lawless Sep 27, 2003 11:31 PM
only a little by somnambulist Sep 28, 2003 6:41 PM
now by lebris Sep 28, 2003 6:53 AM
Thank you by somnambulist Sep 28, 2003 6:39 PM
good read by jimmy_splinter Oct 28, 2003 11:52 PM
splinter by somnambulist Nov 9, 2003 7:07 PM
My Breasts by Billectric Sep 26, 2003 11:22 AM
bill by anniefay Sep 26, 2003 11:46 AM
friday is even better, right? by Billectric Sep 26, 2003 11:47 AM
You don't need a chaperone by Jimboloco Sep 26, 2003 11:54 AM
embrace your breastesses by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Sep 26, 2003 12:07 PM
you know, you are by Billectric Sep 26, 2003 5:56 PM
well, you put in your two breastesses by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Sep 26, 2003 10:13 PM
Boobectric by zygotenmycoffee Sep 26, 2003 1:47 PM
Flaunt it Zygote! Do flaunt them for me! --ahem, I mean for us by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Sep 26, 2003 4:53 PM
even those fat football fan painting by Billectric Sep 26, 2003 5:54 PM
tight tank tops... by feral Sep 26, 2003 2:50 PM
leather pants are way too sweaty by Billectric Sep 26, 2003 5:52 PM
a little pot by foolish_Paeter Oct 1, 2003 10:46 AM
never mind the breastesses by Knip Sep 27, 2003 7:09 AM
only you, bill. by foolish_Paeter Oct 1, 2003 10:47 AM
journey (first post PC) by sjensen500 Sep 26, 2003 12:37 AM
Quixotic by somnambulist Sep 26, 2003 8:37 PM
hey by ellipsis Sep 30, 2003 2:46 PM
thank you by sjensen500 Sep 30, 2003 8:11 PM
s o p r e t t y by the printer salesman Sep 25, 2003 2:08 PM
Honest by The Critic Sep 25, 2003 10:36 PM
real by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Sep 26, 2003 12:09 PM
refreshing by somnambulist Sep 26, 2003 8:31 PM
Stories Bored by mtmynd Sep 25, 2003 12:46 PM
The Shop (forgive the length) by nowherenothing Sep 25, 2003 8:27 AM
PC if you find the time by nowherenothing Sep 26, 2003 12:24 PM
I will by Gothic-Hippie-Chic Sep 26, 2003 1:23 PM
Intro to a Novella, (PC), Jac^3 by somnambulist Sep 24, 2003 6:53 PM
square vs round by lebris Sep 25, 2003 8:16 AM
Miles and Miles of squares... by somnambulist Sep 25, 2003 3:44 PM
The Porno (PC!!!!!!!) by Celtic Skye Sep 24, 2003 4:52 PM
AHAHAHAHA by sasha Sep 24, 2003 4:57 PM
I told the director by Tulate Sep 26, 2003 7:08 PM
workshopped stamp lick by lebris Sep 24, 2003 11:19 AM
yes...on the way... by pelerine Sep 24, 2003 12:53 PM
It's entirely possible by lebris Sep 24, 2003 1:02 PM
resistance by pelerine Sep 24, 2003 3:53 PM
Porno for Gyros by singlemalt Sep 24, 2003 7:26 AM
Just a technical suggestion by lebris Sep 24, 2003 9:22 AM
Thanks by singlemalt Sep 24, 2003 9:51 AM
Curious Functions of the Body (draft) by beatvibe Sep 23, 2003 9:49 PM
thoroughly entertaining by jim vinny Sep 24, 2003 10:00 AM
... by ellipsis Sep 24, 2003 10:27 AM
very clever by jamelah Sep 24, 2003 10:41 AM
ahem... by feral Oct 20, 2003 12:29 PM
variations on a seam by lebris Sep 23, 2003 11:40 AM
porpoise love by lebris Sep 23, 2003 8:50 AM
this is great. by pelerine Sep 23, 2003 9:03 AM
thanks (and in defensive defense of this story) by lebris Sep 24, 2003 11:25 AM
lithium clouds by somnambulist Sep 26, 2003 9:21 PM
thanks by lebris Sep 28, 2003 6:47 AM
On the Porch by elemental123 Sep 22, 2003 10:17 PM
i was by Rosie Sep 30, 2003 11:53 PM
military men don't cry ! by Knip Sep 22, 2003 1:00 AM
Very good - thanks, knip by Billectric Sep 22, 2003 6:46 AM
Hey by Andeh Sep 25, 2003 5:52 AM
i'm by jamelah Sep 25, 2003 8:23 PM
:D by Rosie Sep 30, 2003 12:49 PM
one chapter @ a time by auldmanhattoes Sep 22, 2003 12:36 AM
"The symphony of unbroken darkness" by auldmanhattoes Sep 22, 2003 12:32 AM
my thoughts by lebris Sep 23, 2003 12:23 PM
answer to lebris by auldmanhattoes Sep 24, 2003 7:07 AM
Like walking in boiling treacle by The Critic Sep 23, 2003 10:57 PM
answer to the critic by auldmanhattoes Sep 24, 2003 7:08 AM
Weeds. by Rickety Sep 21, 2003 9:15 AM
like it by the printer salesman Sep 25, 2003 2:18 PM
This is excellent by The Critic Sep 25, 2003 10:27 PM
? by Rickety Sep 27, 2003 12:00 PM
unique by somnambulist Sep 26, 2003 8:58 PM
I am a big round dial with thirty two positions and all of them are off. by Christian Silver Sep 21, 2003 1:02 AM
just lovely by Lawless Sep 21, 2003 2:25 AM
a good read by Billectric Sep 21, 2003 5:20 PM
beautiful by the printer salesman Sep 23, 2003 2:27 PM
I know a printer salesman... by Christian Silver Sep 23, 2003 10:48 PM
nice to read you again by jamelah Sep 24, 2003 10:42 AM
Rictus by jota Sep 20, 2003 9:45 AM
surely by mudshark Sep 22, 2003 2:14 PM
Broke. by Rickety Sep 20, 2003 6:52 AM
... by shishi Sep 27, 2003 9:21 PM
the oops show by relpyroo Sep 19, 2003 10:13 PM
safe sex by relpyroo Sep 19, 2003 9:40 PM
oh relpyroo by Lawless Sep 19, 2003 9:44 PM
thanks by relpyroo Sep 19, 2003 9:52 PM
stamp lick by lebris Sep 19, 2003 1:58 PM
hm. interesting & a few words by pelerine Sep 21, 2003 6:35 AM
Rememberance by weezer Sep 19, 2003 9:25 AM
nothin much by britva Sep 19, 2003 7:59 AM
clinical depression by Yabyum Sep 18, 2003 9:44 PM
I'm bubbling by Billectric Sep 19, 2003 7:03 PM
you got me dancing by zero hero Jan 20, 2004 1:46 AM
HEY FELLA... by stevadore Sep 23, 2003 6:42 AM
The melting clocks of Valencia. by somnambulist Sep 17, 2003 6:50 PM
a warm-up challenge by in_extremis Sep 17, 2003 5:17 PM
image by jamelah Sep 17, 2003 7:27 PM
yeah, and by judih. Sep 17, 2003 8:00 PM
ok, here goes spontaneous by in_extremis Sep 17, 2003 9:15 PM
damn, boy by jamelah Sep 18, 2003 4:10 PM
no pie by Lawless Sep 17, 2003 11:40 PM
nice by jamelah Sep 18, 2003 4:11 PM
uh, yeah by jamelah Sep 18, 2003 4:46 PM
A kid walks up to me and asks , "Why do you talk to yourself" by elemental123 Sep 20, 2003 8:32 AM
A scene. by catharsis Sep 17, 2003 11:55 PM
We eat the green meat by clinbrohf Sep 18, 2003 5:59 AM
Here goes nothin'... by elemental123 Sep 20, 2003 7:44 AM
yay! by Lawless Sep 20, 2003 7:54 AM
Hey, that's good by clinbrohf Sep 20, 2003 9:44 AM
Very alien indeed by elemental123 Sep 20, 2003 12:55 PM
That's how it seemed to Audrey by for the love of hank Sep 17, 2003 3:31 AM
Ah. by Rickety Sep 17, 2003 5:37 AM
hankity by pelerine Sep 21, 2003 10:51 AM
They Bought It (PC first post) by haljon Sep 16, 2003 6:19 PM
critique for you by Lawless Sep 17, 2003 6:23 AM
haljon by stevadore Sep 17, 2003 8:07 AM
5 Figures by cabledog Sep 16, 2003 1:11 PM
weary love by Himali Sep 16, 2003 5:19 AM
It's a QUESTalicious Monday at LitKicks by LitKicks Staff Sep 15, 2003 10:27 AM
Where I come from by lifeasiknowit Sep 14, 2003 9:39 PM
Your story... by DarkMatta-Legend Sep 19, 2003 2:25 AM
Please Critique by jimmynew Sep 14, 2003 8:15 AM
both by cabledog Sep 17, 2003 11:44 AM
Thanks by jimmynew Sep 17, 2003 1:46 PM
scrabble night by somnambulist Sep 13, 2003 7:33 PM
Floyd by Lawless Sep 13, 2003 10:32 PM
critque the hell outta it by jessa_lynne Sep 12, 2003 12:04 PM
Yo. by Rickety Sep 13, 2003 9:08 AM
hey by kandy Sep 29, 2003 5:02 AM
DAMN YOU! by jessa_lynne Sep 29, 2003 5:20 AM
The Three Brothers Grim by BuddhistPunk Sep 12, 2003 4:59 AM
Please critique and/or pet my anxious story ego by exitisa Sep 12, 2003 12:49 AM
hold on.. by Lawless Sep 12, 2003 5:04 AM
The end by Arcadia Sep 12, 2003 9:54 AM
Bar None (edited) by mtmynd Sep 11, 2003 10:10 PM
happy ending by judih. Sep 11, 2003 10:18 PM
my smile by mtmynd Sep 11, 2003 10:20 PM
.....off into the sunset by judih. Sep 11, 2003 10:29 PM
a sir prize... by buddhabitch Sep 12, 2003 4:41 AM
Correction, my Dear... by mtmynd Sep 12, 2003 5:43 AM
the more... by Lawless Sep 12, 2003 5:52 AM
anniversary by minfin Sep 11, 2003 8:21 PM
Life in a redneck town in America by BuddhistPunk Sep 12, 2003 5:55 AM
we sat around by Rosie Sep 11, 2003 1:31 PM
Mountaintop Removal by cabledog Sep 10, 2003 6:18 PM
great by Lawless Sep 10, 2003 6:49 PM
Ditto by smilin_jack Sep 11, 2003 12:48 PM
First timer - God save the queen! (PC! please!) by smilin_jack Sep 9, 2003 10:31 PM
what happens? by Lawless Sep 10, 2003 7:02 AM
Hmmm by smilin_jack Sep 10, 2003 10:57 AM
ohhhhh... by Lawless Sep 10, 2003 6:43 PM
heh by smilin_jack Sep 10, 2003 11:21 PM
Talking heads by Arcadia Sep 9, 2003 7:29 PM
i was just driving to my girlfriend's house by Jaelou Sep 9, 2003 5:20 PM
details by Lawless Sep 9, 2003 7:12 PM
the wall cave by Lawless Sep 8, 2003 7:22 PM
The best good luck .. by BuddhistPunk Sep 12, 2003 6:05 AM
shadows on the cave wall by somnambulist Sep 26, 2003 9:26 PM
Night coffee. by Rickety Sep 8, 2003 5:06 PM
Ode to the high octane drink... by Brushtongue Sep 8, 2003 6:05 PM
cause or effect? by poildecarotte Sep 9, 2003 7:12 AM
you by for the love of hank Sep 17, 2003 3:39 AM
The Suburban Disease by somnambulist Sep 7, 2003 6:24 PM
just think by j_daniels Sep 7, 2003 8:06 PM
hello j by somnambulist Sep 7, 2003 9:49 PM
they love you by Lawless Sep 8, 2003 12:27 AM
hey by poildecarotte Sep 8, 2003 4:01 AM
Untitled, part one. by somnambulist Sep 7, 2003 9:01 AM
We are all made of stars. by somnambulist Sep 6, 2003 9:50 PM
can't quite put my finger on why by ellipsis Sep 6, 2003 10:19 PM
thank you by somnambulist Sep 7, 2003 8:54 AM
hi somnambulist by poildecarotte Sep 7, 2003 1:39 AM
there's a difference by foolish_Paeter Sep 7, 2003 9:45 AM
sure by poildecarotte Sep 7, 2003 10:22 AM
but obviously by poildecarotte Sep 7, 2003 10:24 AM
felt your story by frontal-abstraction Sep 9, 2003 8:54 AM
I loved this by for the love of hank Sep 17, 2003 3:42 AM
Christian, translated pc. (only those two letters are edited) by poildecarotte Sep 6, 2003 6:15 AM
freakin earwigs by Billectric Sep 5, 2003 7:13 PM
meanwhile that goosey fellow is having a beer. by Billectric Sep 5, 2003 7:18 PM
I have a plan that would give Matlock a run for his money. by firecracker Sep 5, 2003 8:08 PM
It all starts by Billectric Sep 6, 2003 5:52 PM
lol by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 7:19 PM
earwigs by Lawless Sep 8, 2003 12:35 AM
earwigs by foolish_Paeter Sep 9, 2003 2:19 PM
unless by foolish_Paeter Sep 9, 2003 2:19 PM
SmashBox Beer by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 10:56 AM
During the war by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 11:03 AM
Black Hat is bartending. by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 11:07 AM
The SmashBox Brewery itself, by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 11:09 AM
yeah, man, by Billectric Sep 5, 2003 7:21 PM
glad you liked it by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 7:23 PM
here's one by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 7:23 PM
Man, that's cool by Billectric Sep 5, 2003 8:00 PM
and here's the other by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 7:25 PM
OH, YEAH by Billectric Sep 5, 2003 8:03 PM
that's by foolish_Paeter Sep 6, 2003 1:49 PM
oh, by the way, by foolish_Paeter Sep 6, 2003 3:19 PM
New at LitKicks: The QUEST -- Get feedback, support -- and get published! by LitKicks Staff Sep 5, 2003 5:23 AM
my sincere apologies to all the non-french speakers in this site im a piece of s by poildecarotte Sep 4, 2003 2:24 PM
oh my by weezer Sep 4, 2003 10:44 AM
audition - first cut by doreen peri Sep 4, 2003 5:51 AM
finish it by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 2:57 PM
waiting with baited eyes... by Lawless Sep 6, 2003 7:12 PM
soft cries of an infant (PC) by messy_doc Sep 3, 2003 7:28 AM
Racing for My Own Finish Line (PC) by Celtic Skye Sep 2, 2003 11:49 PM
:) by smilin_jack Sep 10, 2003 2:36 AM
The Old Hipster by B3jamboree Sep 2, 2003 11:33 PM
something i wrote last year, doesn't flow right...pc by songkran Sep 2, 2003 11:16 PM
you're right, in a way by messy_doc Sep 4, 2003 11:35 AM
imagery by Lawless Sep 6, 2003 7:15 PM
The VRM by foolish_Paeter Sep 2, 2003 3:18 PM
actually, by foolish_Paeter Sep 2, 2003 3:36 PM
this by Lightning Rod Sep 3, 2003 7:13 AM
(this reply is to both of you) by foolish_Paeter Sep 3, 2003 11:04 AM
LOL!! by doreen peri Sep 3, 2003 7:19 AM
hehehe by Billectric Sep 4, 2003 9:20 AM
yeah, by foolish_Paeter Sep 5, 2003 2:13 PM
nice one! by Lawless Sep 6, 2003 7:23 PM
ouch!! by foolish_Paeter Sep 6, 2003 8:28 PM
Forest Fever by BuddhistPunk Sep 2, 2003 3:55 AM
yes by jota Sep 2, 2003 9:14 PM
fear, fun and loathing on the green isle... by buddhabitch Sep 4, 2003 6:42 AM
I Died Alone by Bianca Sep 2, 2003 1:57 AM
Imax Nights- PC please? by Faine Beast Sep 2, 2003 12:20 AM
Rocco's Ristorante by mtmynd Sep 1, 2003 3:22 PM


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