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Need this critique
like a shot in the arm
like a drink to the gut
need this critique
or i'll never write
the wrongs again
need this critique
and all that it entails

but really, Barstool, you don't 'need' a critique, but wouldn't one be fun?

Actually, I liked this poem of yours... and the catchy last lines brought me a smile. Post some more while your on that barstool, and if you buy me a drink... I may just tell you more.