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It is impressive that you managed to bring up those emotions by just imagining yourself in that position. I have been there, can relate overall, and some lines really struck littlememorypangs.
As to a critique to your poem/style: I've been criticized for writing poems that seem a little more like essays, and I can see someone making the same comment here. To Hell with them; it works.