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Fiction?Shadow?Illusion?

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(I wrote this off the top of my head in my Math for Computers class; tell me what you think)

Fiction?
Who really lives
Between the lines
And exists in times
That are said
To only exists
In subjective minds

Shadow?
But whose shadow?
Inside turned out
Ying turned yang
At what point
Does it seem the same
No matter what the name?

Illusion?
But in relation
To whose truth
And what proof
Do you base
Your critical evaluation?

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