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Hi!

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What a great poem! It hooked me right in. I have one small suggestion that may be useful.. In the last phrase 'exists in a small town', do you think inserting 'which' or 'that' exists in a small town gives it more flow? In any case,it's magic was very significant in my day today. I loved it...thank you!
- Loren