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Contempt (please critique)

Posted to Poetry

My song marked in death
in death only did the tune carry whole
and in the death of my melody
I just needed you to know
I really needed you

My song held in contempt
in contempt only did the beat marry whole
and in contempt of the melody
I just had to let you go
I really needed you

And my defense...
I can only claim to know it all when all there is is known
its only whiter in december when november becomes so cold
Ill have everything I ever had and follow nothing through
end task.