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Don Quixote

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Great poem...especially that Don Quixote-line was brilliant..."no idea what his painted eyes have seen"...that is one of those lines I wished I had come up with...maybe it is a stanza or two too lon towards the end? (This is off course my opinion...just a small remark). Too me, it would have made the difference between a very good poem and a small masterpiece...because the beginning possesses sheer power, but the focus, in my point of view, weakens a bit towards the end...anyway, still love it