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Beautiful

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I liked your poem with nature imagery, as I like to look at mountains and brooks, it comes from my childhood, there were brooks flooding in spring, and we kids went around checking how the water was running in them, floating our little bark boats in them, also I remember the noise the wedges of cranes were making on vast field areas (it's a mythic field area in my soul I'll never forget, as I used to have a view in there from my bedroom window), in fact the crane is a mythic bird for Finno-Ugrian people - - but I've hardly ever seen high mountains - Anne