Critique Me

by buddhabitch

Posted to Poetry on 2002-02-25 07:35:00

letting me know
what you think
for these poor lonely lines
slashing hacks on scarlet paper
my blood a panacea
for lost and found
soul on dry ice
smoking an illusion
fire me up
ashes just waste
sprinkled in the garden
waiting for spring
to flower again

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