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Out of a cloud

Posted to Action Poetry




I like the surreal images, they're very well thought out, very "grabs your attention"-esque images...but... now im trying to be helpful... there seems to be a lack of continuity, im not saying this is good/bad but a poem can either be very good if it ends bluntly or it can be very bad... your images though, my god, are excellent.. makes me wanna hear you improvise some more....