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I have thought about that from timt to time, as alot of my poems end abruptly..I think I wanted this one choppy because it was based on an acid trip I had a few years back, and those always seem choppy...
I will keep in mind what you have said, and thank you for the critique. There seems to be very few real critiques around here.
Anyways, cool.
:)