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2 untitled poims, would love some feedback

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is you human?
great!
i is too
but shush friend!
theres two of us
y'know
best be careful
or cautious
as we can
cuz
we ain't sposed
to be
any less
than any man
kings & presidents
ceos & lawyers
life-savin doctors
&dead man buryin men
fathers & mothers
lovers & children
could be teachers
or office holders
professors mayhaps too
writers or poets
beautiful women
sittin close to you
but no matter
jes human
no more or less
or could be
EMPROR GOD!
or
bum drunk
on the road side
one
way
or
another
we
all
got
a
crap
&
one
way
or
other
we
all
just
that.


you could tell me GOD
to find
the hottest number
make bread
drink wine
get on
be merry
raise a house
build some kids
buy some friends
die sad
but happy

i'd still choose
to spend my time
with a gal
and her compassionate eye
forget for three minutes
to chase after
that hoped for
eternity
they've come to call
my
american
dream.