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i don't get it!

Posted to Poetry

everyone has a problem with the last two stanzas?

I'm sorry but:

"...but she who limps is still fuckin' walkin"

is the kick in the teeth that seals it! All of the shit, the good AND the bad shit, through it ALL, in those last words she grins and gives life a big fat fuck you finger!

I dunno what y'er all on about!

This piece is what made me fall in love with this woman. I saw her read it on September 17th 2001 at Zesty's in Vancouver and she blew me away! I had to talk to her (though shy) I did and I've been happy ever since. (Even the times she's peeing on her hands and making sandwiches.)

and BTW Sweetness, why the omissions?

I love you.