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very good stuff...maybe one remark, the poem is hard, but in a gentle, sophisticated way, while the title is really straightforward, it creates this uneasy contrast (I think), maybe this was your intention, and then it totally works, but if it wasn't your intention...it can be me as well, off course...anyway, the poem itself is, as I said, very good!!