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this gives me the feeling

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of one last hoorah
perhaps it's just the mood i'm in...i feel like this relates well to the piece i just wrote.

perhaps we're on the same wave again...who knows i could be totally off.

great writing though.

i really liked these parts: "moving down under the ground where beetles and beezelbub make nest...." and "soon there would be home and nothing to do put my earphones on"