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Great style

Posted to Poetry

To start, the spacing didn't take so much away that it made the poem go bad. I agree that spacing can really be critical in poems sometimes, but in this case you've got a great poem regardless of the spacing. I am searching lots of different styles right now (trying to find my personal tastes) and I find yours to be very strong and imaginative. Keep writing, you do a superb job with poetry!