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argh, stoned..

Posted to Action Poetry




well, its nice in a way, i mean the imagerys nice. i like the rain added in, (rains my fav thig) and the glimpse of beauty line is nice. teh whole idea of making love and then smoking sounds nice.. but just the boned/stoned seems kinda cheesy. well, cheesy is good. dont get me wrong, but bone/stoned. i dont knwo. its 3 am, but hey, its kinda hokie, and thats it.. but overall, this is nice cuz its nice to think about.. and damn, i miss doing anything like that.. (not that i have sex, and then smoke) but whatever.. stuff like that...