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hmmmmmmmm, baby

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yep just like i remember it
judih yer talking sal's language
i love the sensual heartstrut
of this, the curl of a feeling
the heated passion of the prose
mimics the heated passion of the act
& is contrasted by the ice motif
i could go on & on
but it would be sooooo hard.


peace & passion


sal