hmmmmmmmm, baby
Posted to Action Poetry
by salparadise on 2001-04-25 07:03:00
yep just like i remember it
judih yer talking sal's language
i love the sensual heartstrut
of this, the curl of a feeling
the heated passion of the prose
mimics the heated passion of the act
& is contrasted by the ice motif
i could go on & on
but it would be sooooo hard.
peace & passion
sal