i like it also .. but ..
Posted to Action Poetry
by lotusgrl on 2001-04-24 21:33:00
well, it sounds a little like some song thatd be written by some angry ass hardcore band today.. not that your poem is trite, but sounds like something theyd write.. the whole "i am a piece of shit" sounds like those bands, etc. but anyway, on a more positive note, u have made a good point, that everyones immoral, and that u are happy w/ being that way. i will agree that its been sometimes somewhat nice to be evil/angry, etc. its good stuff.
