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Your piece looked so lonely there

Posted to Action Poetry




So I read it
and then I liked it and then I like it much more.

It wasn't realyy imagery full or anything but as I read I imagined this man and his confusion but non confusion it was beautiffully twilightzoneish but beautiful

you should be proud

Bobo

PS I have no tips onhow to get people to read your shit on thi site but try and always comment on others and you will be fine