Your piece looked so lonely there
Posted to Action Poetry
by Bobo on 2001-04-24 08:58:00
So I read it
and then I liked it and then I like it much more.
It wasn't realyy imagery full or anything but as I read I imagined this man and his confusion but non confusion it was beautiffully twilightzoneish but beautiful
you should be proud
Bobo
PS I have no tips onhow to get people to read your shit on thi site but try and always comment on others and you will be fine
