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interesting

Posted to Action Poetry




and highly readable, though i'm really not sure where you are headed, despite the fact that your direction is clearly marked. It seems that the ending isn't really an ending and the beginning is all in one. You've got all your concrete imagery up front, and your tail is wagging only the abstract. I don't know, i'm just blah-blahing, don't pay me any mind.

emma lu