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I feel

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something very interesting in this poem, I mean, maybe you didn't intend for it to be this way, but i feel an almost sad desperation, which i like, i really like the way the poem goes from life to death, and how there's never a spontaneous moment, but in a way, that's both sad and beautiful, because after all, it would be bad if the butterfly did leave the cacoon too early, and yet at the same time, I've never really thought about it from the perspective your poem paints it from... good job!

~Anya