best thing today..
Posted to Action Poetry
by lotusgrl on 2001-04-19 18:03:00
this is your best today. well, the whole line about remorse, longing, anger. hmm.. sounds like what i just wrote kinda... i mean the same feeling, but write so much better. anyway, i dig it and i like how u end it, too. its a nice last line.. to end on a positive, romantic note. awesome.
