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[un]welcome? response

Posted to Action Poetry

i like your style. beginning was a little raw and i'm not sure if the meaning i derived meshed with what i got from the last two thirds of the poem [i'm not sure it rally matters, though] i like your use of imperfect and internal rhyme which is a dificult to master and often unsung poetic technique. last two lines really made the poem for me. good stuff.