A Poem of the Time...critique
Posted to Action Poetry
by JaySmith on 2001-04-18 15:02:00
stare, look
long hair hippie
no-account freak
grow up, grow out
"get a Job"
"buy new clothes"
stare, look
shoes in tatters
socks grungy old
a book...a book
look look
old mind young body
long hair hippie
21st century
grow up
OOO...ahhhh...stare look
there he goes
shoes tattered, big words emoting
no worries, peace, and doting.
look look
