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A Poem of the Time...critique

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stare, look
long hair hippie
no-account freak
grow up, grow out
"get a Job"
"buy new clothes"

stare, look
shoes in tatters
socks grungy old
a book...a book
look look

old mind young body
long hair hippie
21st century
grow up

OOO...ahhhh...stare look
there he goes
shoes tattered, big words emoting
no worries, peace, and doting.
look look