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incredibly complex and interesting

Posted to Action Poetry




I really enjoyed the imagery and patterns. I dig the alliteration (mundane monday, thirsty thursday) and the 2nd line of every stanza starts with People [doing something].

With all due respect, I think I dig this one so much because I could completely envision myself writing something exactly like that using the same words, imagery, symbolism, and writing pattern. great work...