untitled...experiment for me...critique please
Posted to Action Poetry
by joshuagriffin on 2001-04-17 17:56:00
streets wet--rainy shine
ground soaked through with time
the wife on the porch--long drag intake
kids inside--drum drum drum
dog in yard bark bark bark
bum on street--smoking smoking
stars in sky--a dark night shine
husband in bathroom--shooting up
baby in crib--cry cry cry.
