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I too

Posted to Action Poetry

am a cashier, and know what you're talking about, i liked this story, i liked the setting and the way you described the atmosphere, one thing though, and this is really stupid but... you wrote " I am a cashier at a local grocery story..." and I think you meant store :-) told ya it was stupid.. but you know, it is a "correction" and therefore part of a "critique".