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take five (please critique)

Posted to Action Poetry




a night, no moon
paws marked in dirt
in fields
the soundtrack of a
movie plays

inter mission
lewd characters
in the wind
the orange lights
song of hasty chords

collapse smiling
in wordless excitement
time pauses
structure disolved
of planned days
the last thought
day of spring

five brief
minutes
of
freedom