take five (please critique)
Posted to Action Poetry
by rumball107 on 2001-04-16 17:57:00
a night, no moon
paws marked in dirt
in fields
the soundtrack of a
movie plays
inter mission
lewd characters
in the wind
the orange lights
song of hasty chords
collapse smiling
in wordless excitement
time pauses
structure disolved
of planned days
the last thought
day of spring
five brief
minutes
of
freedom
