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not misread...

Posted to Action Poetry

this was one of those poems written on the way out-y'know, where the sex is the last thing to go, but was the symptom most focused on, rather than the actual cause.there's the humor in it, which I'm sure is obvious, and the woman who it was written about is still my best was a stream of conciousness piece, and the result of all of the conflicts present in the relationship spilled out metaphorically. thanks for being unlike the open mic audiences who just catch the superficial sexual innuendos and chuckle.two people trying to cure what ails the relationship by sex alone.