great stuff jazzymike
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by lotusgrl on 2001-04-12 10:06:00
hey, i love the whole drunk aspect, er, that people are drunk off words, etc. thats awesome.. and the lines about atlanta, ohio, and charleston.. charleston so sweet, and atlanta was once filled with laughter, but not now. not in my book anyway, atlanta would make me cry for years and years just thinking about how it used to make me smile.. anyway, i think i should write about that later on here.. you're a great writer, and so what if im biased ;)
