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you know sal, you manage to take a (in my opinion) sometimes over done subject... i saw you naked here, i saw you naked there... you know what i mean? well, you take it and you make it beautiful again. I love how it starts out with this naked idea, but the rest of the poem is just beautiful imagery that paint pictures so well, that the naked thing isn't cliche any more, and instead it becomes like a matisse painting of a naked woman or something.