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2 short things. critique please

Posted to Action Poetry




I.
shooting pain resides
inside the left side of
my brain...
which causes me to reee-frain
from anything but the
anything but the
very most mundane.
what a shame.

II.
seldom comes to a manifestation of myself
- i am seldom.
you may ask me seldom what.
i may seldom answer.