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oh my bump dee bump bump

Posted to Action Poetry




these little emotion slices
are so very honest and cool
with no trace of sentimentality
or contrived construction
baby you haven't even begun
to mine the poetic fever
that is out there hovering
over you like a styrofoam cloud
& you make things like this
bloom almost effortlessly
you have a magnificent future
ahead of you & if you ever stop
writing you'll have to deal
with my wrath personally,
grinning hummmmmm


peace

sal