slow summer day
Posted to Action Poetry
by Anya on 2001-04-10 15:58:00
On slow summer day,
I watch them freeze and unfreeze, forgetting
What they were doing,
Letting dandruff rain fall on refreshing green celery,
hazily dripping away...
I love how this poem almost slows down itself, the movement and the "scene freeze" build a great atmosphere.
~Anya
